Poetry by Skittles_Lover0311
Edited by v3Olympus
You can see a sample of her editting in this poem I will post the original version in the end of the chapter.

A custom from over thousands of years ago,
It's a curse upon both father and daughter.
A practice so bizarre,it is horrid.
In the birth of a son, there is celebration
But birth a daughter, there is mourning.
They say, "Marriage is an auspicious union made in heaven!"
If so, I wonder why it's now mere buisness.
It was once a little girl's most wondrous dream-
The result of her father's many sacrifices,
But today it has become a nightmare;
It is no dream, but a torturous reality.
The fruits of her father's labour were returned rotten-
In payment of his toil,they burnt his daughter.
Now, his weary hands set fire to her pyre.
Because of those greedy monsters, his daughter is dead.
But he cannot avenge her- has equal part in her murder.
Somewhere in the deepest corner of his heart-
In his painful cries and endless tears,
He holds immense regret of not celebrating her birth.

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